Turn Back the Sun


9th Feb 2019, 1:00 PM in Part 1
Average Rating: 5 (5 votes)

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9th Feb 2019, 1:00 PM
the dumpling is STEAMED

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9th Feb 2019, 1:02 PM

"Maybe I want to numb my head."

9th Feb 2019, 1:09 PM

we all laughed at headon commercials but now they're
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9th Feb 2019, 5:00 PM

Maybe he just needs a nap? (Sleeping can get rid of a headache.)
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10th Feb 2019, 5:19 AM

This whole situation could be resolved by Kalgan just taking a nap.
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10th Feb 2019, 11:29 AM

wHAT? Emotions and reason not being shown as always and 100% mortal enemies in fiction?? What is this madness??
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11th Feb 2019, 4:18 AM

Aha, I didn't even think about that trope when writing this scene, but yeah it's gotten a bit old. I like the idea of loving something more the more you learn about it.
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18th Feb 2019, 2:34 AM

I think you may be legitimately skilled at lettering. It looks like you might be composing your panels with lettering in mind as a part of the overall composition, which is a skill most people don't have. The dialogue balloons flow with the characters and panel layouts through the page very effectively.
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18th Feb 2019, 4:18 AM

Thanks so much! I took some time to read up on page composition before I started and when I thumbnailed I marked the line I thought the reader's eye would follow on each page. It was honestly a pretty new concept to me to think not just of the panel's composition but the whole page, but I do feel like I'm getting the hang of it! :)
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23rd Feb 2019, 12:34 AM

It's paying off. I wouldn't have assumed you were new to the technique, because you've pulled it off so well.
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26th Feb 2019, 8:41 AM

Mort reminds me of the time Jack Valenti explained the MPAA rating system on Freakazoid! Any chance he's part of the character design?
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2nd Mar 2019, 10:25 PM

Haha, he wasn't but I definitely see the resemblance!
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