Turn Back the Sun


6th Jan 2019, 12:00 PM in Part 1
Average Rating: 5 (6 votes)

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17th Dec 2018, 12:02 AM
Aaaah okay that's the first scene! If you're intrigued, if this grips you, if you need more right now, consider supporting my efforts! Linked below is my Ko-fi page, where you can throw me a one-time contribution or become a monthly supporter. There are sweet treats awaiting you either way, but monthly supporters get next week's page this week! There's a page there already!! Wow!

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6th Jan 2019, 2:36 PM

I like Elijah, he's bendy and poetic. I don't want to piss off the doctor.

Your art has gotten soooo goood, I'm really digging the compositions and designs so far. I can't wait to see how Elijah screws things up, since I expect he will >_>
6th Jan 2019, 3:28 PM

Weee, thank you Spelly!

Elijah's basically a big noodle, and what have big noodles ever done right?
7th Jan 2019, 4:10 PM

Cue Gene Kelly montage.

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7th Jan 2019, 5:02 PM

He is a fan of the classics! :)
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8th Jan 2019, 10:57 PM

Haha, this was my thought exactly!

Roux, this is all so wonderful so far! I'm so intrigued with all of these new characters! Eeeeeee!
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9th Jan 2019, 8:48 PM

Alicia!! Thank you! I'm so excited for people to finally meet... uh... my versions of them!
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8th Jan 2019, 5:31 AM

Well, I don't know the original movie that this takes inspiration from, but I'm intrigued nonetheless!
I'm also kind of intrigued by how much of a long squiggly spaghetti Elijah is xD
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8th Jan 2019, 1:11 PM

Thank you, Ninja! I'm actually super excited to see how people who don't know the film read it! I tried really hard to make it stand on its own, so you shouldn't need to know anything about it. :)

(Also yes, he's my spaghetti boi)
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10th Jan 2019, 3:20 PM

Ahhh just a few more days and I'll be back with a US ISP and can do Ko-Fi!!!
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10th Jan 2019, 4:47 PM

Aaah! Welcome back!! I'm actually heading to the UK in just a few weeks myself! We're crossing paths!

Thank you so so much again for your help in critiquing the script! I don't think this first scene actually changed much, but you'll see down the line that it diverges a good bit from the draft you saw, so you'll have some surprises to look forward to! :D

And!! If you do spring for the Ko-fi, I'm really trying to provide a lot of cool background stuff for one-time contributors, so hopefully it'll be interesting. :) But don't feel obligated at all!!
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