Aaaah okay that's the first scene! If you're intrigued, if this grips you, if you need more right now, consider supporting my efforts! Linked below is my Ko-fi page, where you can throw me a one-time contribution or become a monthly supporter. There are sweet treats awaiting you either way, but monthly supporters get next week's page this week! There's a page there already!! Wow!
I like Elijah, he's bendy and poetic. I don't want to piss off the doctor.
Your art has gotten soooo goood, I'm really digging the compositions and designs so far. I can't wait to see how Elijah screws things up, since I expect he will >_>
Well, I don't know the original movie that this takes inspiration from, but I'm intrigued nonetheless!
I'm also kind of intrigued by how much of a long squiggly spaghetti Elijah is xD
Thank you, Ninja! I'm actually super excited to see how people who don't know the film read it! I tried really hard to make it stand on its own, so you shouldn't need to know anything about it. :)
Aaah! Welcome back!! I'm actually heading to the UK in just a few weeks myself! We're crossing paths!
Thank you so so much again for your help in critiquing the script! I don't think this first scene actually changed much, but you'll see down the line that it diverges a good bit from the draft you saw, so you'll have some surprises to look forward to! :D
And!! If you do spring for the Ko-fi, I'm really trying to provide a lot of cool background stuff for one-time contributors, so hopefully it'll be interesting. :) But don't feel obligated at all!!
Your art has gotten soooo goood, I'm really digging the compositions and designs so far. I can't wait to see how Elijah screws things up, since I expect he will >_>